All I have left to say
is that all hopes are gone away
so there's no reason to stay
tides takes off as they may
drown, slowly, gently in
hopelessness sea
no need for struggle
no need to fight
every wind will blow you away
every step will break the way
and everything you say
shall be gone in one day
now you are high in
the sky
float away, fade away
be free.
I love the ending part! I'd change the "no need to fight" with "no need...something else (maybe a noun?). All the rest is very good!
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